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for some help.
I need help with the anatomy and proportions of this young man here, his waist is a little thin and I have a really hard time drawing legs, I think the hand on his hip looks fine but, if the placement of it or the arm is incorrect, please correct me. Are his shoulders placed right? I feel like his arms are disproportionate and not long enough. ALSO The hips!!!!! How do you draw hips??? I looked up some tutorials but I still can tell they are not right. Also is the head too small?? IS his ear in the right place? You don't have to answer all these questions... but I'd love some pointers.
Thanks to
for the critique and overdraw, he looks waaaay better now~
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for some help.I need help with the anatomy and proportions of this young man here, his waist is a little thin and I have a really hard time drawing legs, I think the hand on his hip looks fine but, if the placement of it or the arm is incorrect, please correct me. Are his shoulders placed right? I feel like his arms are disproportionate and not long enough. ALSO The hips!!!!! How do you draw hips??? I looked up some tutorials but I still can tell they are not right. Also is the head too small?? IS his ear in the right place? You don't have to answer all these questions... but I'd love some pointers.
Thanks to
for the critique and overdraw, he looks waaaay better now~Image size
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Hello~! Most of your anatomy actually looks really good! but there are a couple of issues with the shoulders and the hanging arm. One thing I think that could really help with this and dynamic posing in general is looking into contrapposto. Ummm.. I'll link you to some vids too
www.youtube.com/watch?v=b1nxf5… <- Posing things
www.youtube.com/watch?v=eWRF9G… <- This guy has some good anatomy tutorials his art is super gorgeous btw ..like wow
www.youtube.com/watch?v=8j39Nq… <- Gesture drawing but kind of relates
His head seems fine, but I think his hanging arm is a little short and too thin?? =v=; That whole arm and hand is a little smaller than the other one, but it should be about the same size since he's only turned slightly. His shoulder and arm should be more hidden behind his body too.
I think one of the bigger issues is actually your posing and like how things connect together. Like even though he's turned, the his chest seems to be facing forward/front too much. And because the shoulders and hips are kind of on a horizontal line, the figure seems quite stiff.
Sorry if this isn't too helpful, first time doing this
I'll upload an overdraw for you when I get home and hopefully that'll make more sense.
www.youtube.com/watch?v=b1nxf5… <- Posing things
www.youtube.com/watch?v=eWRF9G… <- This guy has some good anatomy tutorials his art is super gorgeous btw ..like wow
www.youtube.com/watch?v=8j39Nq… <- Gesture drawing but kind of relates
His head seems fine, but I think his hanging arm is a little short and too thin?? =v=; That whole arm and hand is a little smaller than the other one, but it should be about the same size since he's only turned slightly. His shoulder and arm should be more hidden behind his body too.
I think one of the bigger issues is actually your posing and like how things connect together. Like even though he's turned, the his chest seems to be facing forward/front too much. And because the shoulders and hips are kind of on a horizontal line, the figure seems quite stiff.
Sorry if this isn't too helpful, first time doing this
I'll upload an overdraw for you when I get home and hopefully that'll make more sense.